4th gig at Speech Motion results in a re-think

No suit this time, but like last time there was a mixed reception to my letters and their replies. The forty-ish audience members were predominantly wannabe poets /film makers with a smattering of newish stand-up acts...oh and a dog (seriously). Definitely feel this is a venue geared more for the arts rather than comedy and needs to be avoided in the future...unless I start to write poems of course. I really feel I've got to get the audience to 'buy' into me and why I write my letters much much more. I need a 'warmer' delivery style. The letters themselves are good, they aren't laughing wholeheartedly because they don't know how to take me. My act is very much still work in progress.